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2007-10-03 08:35 am

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I was reading a few LJ posts this morning and came across Kate Elliott's advice for new writers (pt 1). What she says smacks of common sense through and through. However, it's so easy to forget that if you want to be a good writer, you need to keep writing in order to improve.

Kate's post has started the wheeling turning in my head (which is always a scary things!), and I decided to write down a few of the biggest challenges that I have faced as a new writer.

Below continues a few of my biggest obstacles as a new writer. )
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2007-09-25 10:36 am

Stonecoast Update and Other Items

My first semester at Stonecoast is about halfway over. The last few months have been pretty difficult, but I wouldn't trade them for anything. I have read more books than ever because I've switched to commuting to work by train. What a difference that has made on my study time!

I've also submitted several annotations and two stories to my mentor, and I've just received his comments on my September packet. Clearly, I still have things to work on (which is why I'm here), but I see a shift in his comments. He's no longer focusing on the predictability of my characters and the flatness of my stories. There is improvement! Yeah!

The feedback that I received this month was much more engaging than what I received on my previous stories. My mentor was able to comment on the complexity of the characters and layers of the plot rather than just focusing on story mechanics. As a result of his evolving feedback, I'm struck by the notion that the best way to see your improvement is through the criticism that you receive, and I'm definitely starting to see a change in the type of comments that I receive on my work. This is very exciting stuff! This is exactly why I enrolled in the Stonecoast MFA program.

The month of October is going to be a killer with 3 stories due in early November. I'm really going to have to kick into high gear to get my pieces ready, but I have this nagging fear that I'm going to be submitting 1st or 2nd draft work for the January workshop.

This raises the question of how polished do you make your work before sending it to a workshop? If you polish a story to the point of gleaming, is it worth workshopping? Is it better to workshop a story that has problems so that you get some new perspectives on potential fixes? I'm not sure what the best solution is on this front. Does it really matter as long as the prose is readable and your critiquers won't be distracted by annoying line editing issues. What do you think?
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2007-09-10 12:33 pm

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In the spirit of using Sherwood's idea of using LJ to network, I thought I'd put this request out for everyone's review......

For my 3rd Semester Project at Stonecoast I am going to be adapting a screenplay from an 18th Century lyric poem (which I don't want to name here). In addition to writing a full-length screenplay, I'll also be writing a paper on the adaptation process. As part of my research paper, my program director also wants me to do research on other screenplays that have been adapted from poems.

As part of my research, I would love to interview a couple of writers who have adapted screenplays from poems, short stories, and novels. I'd also like to interview authors who have had their work adapted into a screenplay by someone else. If you have done this and would like to be interviewed by me or if you know of another writer who would like to be interviewed, please send me an email at: erin_underwood at hotmail dot com

I'm still in the developmental phase of my research, but I'd like to get a few interviews lined up for the near future. Realistically, I'll want to start interviewing people between November 2007 and March 2008. I'm happy to work with your schedule and to do it in the most convenient way possible for you, including email or phone.

..... Ok here's the crazy part of the request .....

I would really value being able to interview Neil Gaiman since he has not only adapted screenplays from novels, but he's also adapted the new Beowulf film from the poem. Since I don't know Mr. Gaiman, I thought I'd throw this request to the wind and see if there really is magic in the world.


Thank you for your time and consideration. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me.

Erin M. Underwood
Stonecoast MFA Program, Popular Fiction S'09
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2007-09-04 01:57 pm

Poetry to Screenplay

I need your help with this.....

I'm starting to plan one of my big projects for Stonecoast in which I will adapt a poem into a screenplay. My professor asked me to also include research on other poems that have been adapted into screenplays.

As I'm just starting this research, I thought I'd ask you if you know of any poems that have been adapted into screenplays.

This project is going to be so fun!

Thanks for your help!
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2007-08-17 08:37 am


How did this happen? I'm utterly exhausted. I think I could sleep a week away and I'd still be tired. Argh! I need more time in the day, which means I can't waste what I have sleeping, but that's exactly what I've been doing all week.

In any case, I've just finished my final revision of "Give and Take" and sent it off to F&SF. We'll see how that goes. It's a bit darker than their usual fare, but it seems like it would still be a good fit if they like it. This is one of the stories that I workshopped at Stonecoast and I received some great feedback. Learning how to incorporate workshop feedback is an interesting process. You can't take it all. So what do you take? This is a difficult question, especially when the feedback you receive is from someone you highly respect.

I think the only solution is to find what resonates most with what you're trying to do with the story. So, I took their advice and ruthlessly cut some of my favorite stuff, added in some new prose, and left a few items that I felt needed to remain. I'm really curious to see how others react to the story. Hopefully, this story is an improvement. I feel like it's better, but sometimes it's just too difficult to judge "level of improvement" for myself.

On the reading front, I've just finished Jurassic Park, which was a heck of a lot of fun to read! Now, I'm starting on Alice in Wonderland. I've got the Penguin edition, which has an introduction by Hugh Haughton. The introduction has blown my mind. I wish I could say more, but I won't until after I've read the book completely. I love good books with scholarly introductions!

Yikes! It's 9:05! I better get to work. Have a great day everyone.
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2007-08-07 03:09 pm

World Fantasy 2007

I've recently added World Fantasy 2007 to my schedule. It looks like a great con, but I have to tell you it looks a little daunting. Check out how many people have already registered and the con isn't until Nov 1-4. The size of the con is huge. HUGE!

The theme for the con is "GHOSTS AND REVENANTS: Memory, History, and Folklore". Here is the official blurb from the site:

    GHOSTS AND REVENANTS, MEMORY, HISTORY, AND FOLKLORE -- An exploration of the tradition of the ghost in literature as a harbinger, as a manifestation of guilt, conscience, memory, or the past; and as manifested in the folklore and history of the northeastern United States and Canada. This covers everything from Native American folklore and storytelling through "The Legend of Sleepy Hollow" to Straub's Ghost Story and Jackson's The Haunting of Hill House. We will explore the tradition and the uses of the ghost story, and how it continues in contemporary fantastic fiction and mutates in a 21st century environment. While we expect to have panels on such topics as "M.R. James and His Successors" and "The Legacy of Shirley Jackson" we might also have something as up-to-the-minute as "Ghosts in the Machine: The Supernatural and Computers."

If you are planning to go to World Fantasy 2007, you better sign up soon. It looks like the hotels within walking distance are nearly gone! Also, be sure to let me know if you're planning to go. :-)
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2007-08-06 12:31 pm

Showing and Telling in Writing

Madeleine Robbins made a terrific post on Deep Genre's website about Showing and Telling.

When is there too much showing? When do you need to tell? When do you simply need to imply?

Check out the discussion on Show Don’t Tell But Don’t Show Too Much. There is some great info there for writers who are struggling to answer these questions in their own writing.
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2007-07-27 10:56 am
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The Cat Strikes Back

Cats are clever creatures and mine takes the cake. Oliver has taken to sitting on my alarm clock and last night at some point, he managed to set the clock ahead by one hour. Since I started my MFA program, I've been getting up earlier in order to write in the mornings. My usual rising time is around 4:30 am, but this morning I decided to get up at 4:00.

So, at 4:00 am I drag my groggy butt out of bed and stumble upstairs to my office. I spend an hour writing and finishing the last section of my newest story. Once done, because I don't like to look at the time while I write, I looked at the clock to see how long I had before having to get ready for work. Funny thing, it was STILL 4:00 AM!

That's when I figured out that my cat pranked me and set the alarm clock ahead by an hour. Some cats predict death. Some cats predict earthquakes. But my cat, my cat, he controls time!
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2007-07-18 11:04 pm

Stonecoast - July 2007 Residency

If the world were an ideal place, the July 2007 Stonecoast residency would have been perfect. But life happens and things aren't always perfect, but sometimes that lack of perfection just makes the experience all the richer.

Three days into the residency I found out that my father had passed away. Although he had been ill, very ill, hearing that he was gone still shocked me. For twenty years my dad has been beating death off with a mighty big stick - and winning the better part of the battle. This time when death called, I believe my dad welcomed him like an old friend stopping by for a refreshing drink on a hot summer day.

Love deeply, live passionately, and follow your dreams. That's what my dad always told me. So, that's what I did. I followed my dreams all the way to Freeport, Maine where I found some of the most incredible people I could ever hope to meet. The support and concern that the administration, faculty, and my fellow students showed me after my dad passed away will always be a testament to the strength of the Stonecoast program.

My fellow popular fiction students not only became part of my tribe, they became part of my family. They were there to sooth and comfort me when I needed it. Even better, they were there to kick my ass too.

The intense learning environment at Stonecoast was amazing. I could have gone home, but my dad wanted me to stay and I'm glad I did. The seminars given by graduating students and faculty, along with the daily writing workshops, helped me to understand writing on a whole new level. I began to see the fullness of my characters's lives even before they hit the page; I finally realized how to thread multiple plots together; and I learned ways to show character motivation through the use of well placed details within the prose.

As much as I'd like to spell out the secrets to writing, it's just not possible because my way isn't your way. The biggest lesson I've learned is that writing is a journey that we each need to accomplish on our own. It's a journey that we all take at our own pace, one step at a time. If we're lucky, we have friends to help us along the way.

Somehow, I managed to luck out and get Jim Kelly as my mentor this semester. I guess paying off the Fates worked in my favor. Yep, I'm pretty damned lucky. JPK is a story doctor extraordinaire and he's mine to torture all semester long. My pal Linda got the lovely and talented Kelly Link as her mentor and sweet Diana got the Queen of Suspense Julia Spencer Fleming as her mentor. I can't help but to feel like we have just embarked on an amazing adventure and we're going to have one hell of an experience along the way! :-)

If you'd like to see a few pictures of the residency, check out these photos .

Thanks again to everyone for your support over the last week. It hurts like hell to lose a parent, but each kind word makes the string a little easier to bear.
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2007-07-06 06:04 am

The Drive to Stonecoast

This is it! In two hours I will be in my car and driving to Maine. This is the first of my 5 10-day residencies. The next one will be in January. At this residency, I'm going to meet all of my fellow students and instructors, I'm going to have a mentor assigned to me, and I'm going to develop my study plan for the semester with my mentor.

The pre-residency jitter hit me yesteday and I freaked out just a little as I struggled with the "I suck" blues. I talked to a few writer friends and they smiled with that knowing gleam that says, "Hey, we all suck!"

This weekend, Readercon will be going strong in Burlington, MA. Writers from all over are coming and part of me wishes that I was going there, too. I would really like to attend an underground panel (everyone would be nameless, of course) that is titled "You're always going to feel like you suck so just deal with it and keep writing". :-)

Ok, it's time for me to sign off for now. I've got to bush my hair, pack the car, and zip over to the train station in Salem to pick up Jason McCarty. Poor guy is likely to be waiting there in the rain.

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2007-06-29 05:32 am

Stonecoast: An Essay for Workshop Attendees

With only a week until my first Stonecoast residency I figured it was time to read Ursula Le Guin's essay "Prides: An Essay on Writing Workshops". Although Le Guin admittedly comes down on the side of supporting workshops, she does so with some reservations.

She explains that although workshops have their advantages, they have some significant dangers. One of the less harmful dangers is that people often go to a workshop thinking that they will learn how to write. When in actuality, learning how to write is done outside the workshop as you cycle through writing new drafts and writing new stories.

One of the more dangerous problems with a workshop arises when a student or an instructor brings his ego with him to the workshop. Le Guin even goes as far as to say workshops should come with a warning not to "feed the ego". Why? Because egos don't serve any educational purpose in this type of setting. In fact, it interrupts the process of learning, especially if it is the instructor who brings the ego to class. Egos often serve to undermine confidence, show favoritism, or destroy the dreams of others - none of which are justifiable actions within any educational setting.

Another danger that Le Guin points out is the "eternal returner", otherwise known as workshop codependency. This is primarily targetted at people who haven't written a thing in years, yet they continue to go to workshops, submitting the same piece time and again, and telling others what this famous person or that famous person said about the story. Essentially, this is a waste of time for everyone if that workshop attendee doesn’t get down to the business of writing new material.

But there is good news! Le Guin admits to being a workshop junkie. One of the most valuable assets of a workshop is the experience that the instructor brings to the table. According to Le Guin, "Maybe nobody can teach anybody how to write, but, just as techniques for attaining profit and prestige can be taught in the commercial and establishmentarian programs, so realistic expectations, useful habits, respect for the art, and respect for oneself as a writer can be acquired in work-centered workshops."

In addition, workshops help to you learn how to practice the craft of writing. This is done through exercises assigned by the instructor, reading and critiquing of other students' manuscripts, learning how to take criticism, and learning how to work together as a group of writers. The best workshops are those where everyone works hard together. "This is such a rare and valuable experience that it's no wonder good workshops almost always spin off into small peer groups that may go on working together for months or years," says Le Guin.

Although you may not "learn how to write" at a workshop, you will learn "what it is to write". She describes the workshop as a pride of lions gathering around the waterhole for a drink. I can't help but to agree with her on this point. And, yes, "it is something to have belonged, even for a week, to a pride of lions."

As an aside, to my friends who attended the Viable Paradise 10 workshop: Thanks for being my pride of lions.
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2007-06-28 10:25 pm

The World Building of Katharine Kerr

If you're interested in checking out an author who is an absolute pro at world building, you've got to read Katharine Kerr's Deverry novels. Kerr is arguably one of the best world-building masters within the genre of epic fantasy. If you want to write fantasy and you have never read one of Kerr's novels, you should go out and read at least one of the Deverry books today...and you should probably start with the first book, Daggerspell.

One of the things that I like about the world Katherine Kerr creates is that it is multi-dimensional. What I mean by this is that Deverry, Eldidd, Bardek, and the Westlands don't feel like they exist purely on paper. She brings her world to life by using prose with a pulse, prose that is filled with detail rich content about the land, its people, and their concerns while leaving out the sterility that comes with many SF/F novels in which you feel as if you've just been spoon-fed information.

However, I think I should give you fair warning that Kerr uses a unique timeline, which orders events by their importance rather than by their temporal sequence within a novel. Once you get used to this unique structure, the overall story arc takes on a much richer and deeper meaning. But since I'm only talking about world building here, I'll put the "time line" discussion off for a while.
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2007-06-28 06:06 am

Writing Update

I haven't been posting much in my LJ recently because I've been writing like a bat out of hell. With Stonecoast looming in the near future (next week!) I seem to be struck by inspiration.

Over the last couple weeks, I have written 3 new first drafts. Plus, I have 2 other first drafts that were done about a month ago. I figure this is a good way to start the program since I'm a slow writer. I hope they don't mind that I've been stockpiling first draft stories for about two months so that I can use them in the MFA program. I can't imagine that they would mind.

The great thing about having finished this fistful of stories is that I feel really productive. For the first time since I have started writing, I truly believe that I can produce at least two decent short stories per month; maybe more if the muses strike!

Now, it's time for revisions and getting these guys in shape to give to my mentor ... and then send them out into the big bad world of publishing. Wish me luck!
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2007-06-22 09:06 am
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Where do stories come from?

Clearly, they come from my car.

This morning while driving to work and listening to Hawai'i '76 by Israel "IZ" Kamakawiwo'ole, I came up with another story idea. Of the last 10-12 significant story ideas that I have had, nearly all of them came to me while in my car to or from work.

I'm not sure why my car out of all the cars and all the places in the world should have become this mobile nexus of story ideas, but I'm sure glad I've got it! The scary thing is that I'm going to start commuting to work via the local commuter train, and I'm not sure what this will mean for my future creative juices.
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2007-06-19 05:46 am

The Road to Stonecoast

The road to Stonecoast

One of the things that I am going to do with my Live Journal account is to document my time spent at Stonecoast. I want to capture the experience to remind myself of what I have been through and to share it with others who are curious about this program.

With my first residency looming close, only two weeks away, I thought it was time to capture the experiences that have brought me this far along the path to receiving my MFA. This post is longer than my average Stonecoast related post because it seemed silly to capture all of this pre-Stonecoast “stuff” in small bits and pieces.

And the saga begins … )
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2007-06-18 03:11 pm
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I just finished the first draft of another short story. The whole thing is pretty solid, except for the opening.

I just couldn't figure out how to start the story. So, I began with the first scene that I was able to fully picture in my head. After that, the writing went smoothly and quickly.

I wonder if the reason I couldn't write a "beginning" is because I was trying to force a false start to the story. I'm now beginning to think that the first scene is all the beginning that I need, but I'm still hung up on the idea that it needs a beginning because I've never started a story like this before - in the middle of a conversation from which all of the action is spawned. (I guess you could say that it's a "cut the crap & get to the meat" beginning.)

Does anyone have any thoughts on beginnings?